Coursework: Ignite presentation learner response

1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the categories. 


WWW-

  • Good slides
  • Bullet points 
  • Well designed
  • use of images
  • Very clear
  • Good choice of locations
  • Good idea about media language
  • Some theory (Hall & Blumer and Kats)
  • Good measured pace of presentation
EBI-
  • Some slides were missing images
  • abrupt ending
  • Add more information to the bullet points
  • How to create brand identity
  • Lacking representation
  • more media terminology 
  • No enlisted videos


1) Research (3)
2) Coursework concept (3)
3) Language: terminology and theory (3)
4) Representations / social and cultural contexts (2)
5) Audience and Industry / digital convergence (3)
6) Presentation delivery (4)


2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write your own detailed WWW and EBI for your coursework concept and presentation as a whole.

1) Research (3) x5 (3) x1
2) Coursework concept (4) x2 (2) x1 (3) x3
3) Language: terminology and theory (4) x1 (3) x5
4) Representations / social and cultural contexts (3) x5 (2) x1
5) Audience and Industry / digital convergence (3) x5 (2) x1
6) Presentation delivery (4) x4 (3) x2

EBI-
  • Good location x2
  • Good use theory x4
  • Well spoken x2
  • Good description
  • Good concept x3
  • Good presentation
EBI-
  • Pause when speaking
  • More theorists to be used
  • No pictures in some slides
  • Show up to lessons


3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your concept offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Is it achievable to film with the resources you have available? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others? 

I need to talk more about representation in my statement of intent. The concept is good but it needs to be fleshed out a bit more, brand identity is quite lacking. It is appropriate for the target audience. I believe that it won't be too difficult to film at these locations. Shoreditch carpark will be a bit annoying as I might get interrupted quite a bit by cars trying park. There is definitively more media terminology that I can add. Same goes for theory. There is only two theorists in there.

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